Good shit ... a little raw, but around here, raw's good. A diamond in the rough.

This is good.  I'll admit that I did think of "Average Homeboy" when I was listening to the tracks.  



But the thing is you are rapping from your experience, it's very honest.  I appreciate your honesty and the heart that you bring to it. I listened to a few of the tracks and I could really put myself in your shoes, some of it is universal shared experience, some of it more remote but reminding me of how I felt about things a decade or two ago.  Sure, you could sharpen this up with a producer/promoter and once you've done a few shows or guested a few times on others raps and keep putting tracks together you'll definitely go somewhere if you stick with it.  But just keep it real, that's what makes it special, for me anyway.  And fakeness is what makes most hip hop lame, for me, anyway.